You'll never get an audience to pay you $100 million as long as your
language skills -- in print and in code -- are unacceptable.

Please tell me the Sentences which are wrong and what should be in
place of them.

On Page http://www.GetClub.com/Chess.html

What should be the design of this page what style should it be that UI
looks great.

What are the things that should be removed?

Test looks like newsgroup do you think I should remove those text then
what should be written in place?

Looks like your Suggestions will help me improve the GetClub Chess.

What else can be done to make GetClub work as good as ChessMaster.

Bye
Sanny